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| Final copy. |
Feedback from draft one:
Positives:
- Cohesive colour scheme
- Film reel
- Positioning of additional information (barcode, price etc)
Negatives:
- Masthead - too army style
- remove the speech bubble
- yellow looks odd on the competition badge
- The main image is too high up
- Frame around the black and white image.
After receiving the feedback on my first draft, I then made the changes to create this final product.
I had the black and white image on an angle origionally, but after my feedback I changed the position to make the text fit better. I also made the issue number and website smaller due to it being less important and it made more room to move the exclusive text up.
I wanted to keep the block type font for my maskhead, so I changed the font into something similar. This font I believe is more suitable for a magazine.
However, I then received one last bit of feedback about my magazine. The black and white image did not seem to fit well enough therefore I deleted it and made the text 'Latest Interview With ...' larger and moved it up and I changed the 'Exclusive photos from Unhinged' to 'Hostage' so there was not too much repetition.
However, I then received one last bit of feedback about my magazine. The black and white image did not seem to fit well enough therefore I deleted it and made the text 'Latest Interview With ...' larger and moved it up and I changed the 'Exclusive photos from Unhinged' to 'Hostage' so there was not too much repetition.


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