Pitch and feedback

This is the Pitch for our Trailer.

We had to work as a group to put this together and we all had divided sections to cover.

The feedback I received was:

"You have a very good range of sounds planned for your trailer with reasons linked to the genre and your target audience. you explained the rationale behind using inter titles rather than a voiceover well and you explained the choice of settings. You related each of these to your research of existing films and have considered the practicalities of filming them. Be careful that you plan the mise-en-scene of the therapist office so it looks realistic and rehearse the filming at night to ensure it is not too dark and the audience can see the clues."

Reading the feedback I received made me think that rehearsing scenes would be a good idea and less time consuming on the day of filming.

Watching back from the pitch, I noticed my nerves got the better of me. I know next time, I need to be more confident so my speech flows better and I can get across my ideas easier to the audience.